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This week is theme

So, this week in Intro To Fiction, we are studying ‘Theme.’  Which always makes me think of “The Jane Austin Book Club” where Prudie goes on about “Jane’s Theme” and kinda gets on the nerves of everyone else there except for Grigg (who was uncomfortable as it was) and Silvia who was a little preoccupied with her own personal crisis.

I actually like the movie, but don’t like the book.  Which is an oddity because usually its either equal status or I like the book better.  I like to watch the film first because its like having deleted scenes when you read the book.  But in this case, THey changed enough of the book that I much prefer the movie.  Not to say there weren’t times I wanted something from the book in the movie, but generally the movie was better.  Plus Dean was a steelers fan:)

Another book that failed to meet the expectations of the movie was The Wedding Date (or Asking For Trouble if you want to read the book).  The book and the movie share a common plot…Older sister is going to younger sister’s engagement party and hires an escort to pose as her boyfriend.    The big difference between the movie and the book is:

  1. The book goes over a longer period of time, from the engagement party till after the honeymoon
  2. The names are different and everyone lives in England
  3. Sophie (Kat in the movie) lives with her best friend and friends brother and they take an active role in the story.  This plot is not in the movie.
  4. TJ is in the book, in the form of cousin Tamara who has a simular role, except she (and apparently 95% of the family) doesn’t like Paul (Edward in the movie AKA the fiancée)
  5. The fiancée is a jerk
  6. Kit (Jeff) and Bianca (the sister, forget her name in the move) actually stay together, they run off together after the honeymoon.
  7. Josh (Nick) isn’t an escort.  He was filling in for an actual escort, since his friend was running the company. 

Now unlike The Jane Austin Book Club, Asking For Trouble is equally as enjoyable as the movie.  Its just that they are almost two different stories.  And if I had to choose, I’d probably choose the movie.  If only because I hate that Kit/Jeff won in the end of the book and that Paul was a jerk.  Edward is lovable in the movie (half because of the character, half because Its Jack Davenport.

I’m going to be posting again tonight to get my entries up to the correct number.  I’m two down (one after this entry) from being an entry a day since I started.

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Weekly Reading pii

 

The House on Mango Street – Sandra Cisneros

Basically a girl (I assume its a girl) describes her family’s new home, which is run down and how it compares to her previous homes and the dream house her family has in their minds.

I Stand Here Ironing – Tillie Olsen

A mother, while ironing, goes over the 19 years she’s spent raising her daughter , wondering why the Teacher wanted her to come in and discuss Emily.  She thinks about how Emily was a beautiful baby, but got sick and for awhile was thin and straggly.  How Emily didn’t like school, and how she always seemed to be second best to her younger sister Susan who was five years younger.  She also talks about having to send her daughter away a couple times when she was younger (once because she had no money to raise her with and once because the social worker thought it was best if Emily went to a special home for convalesce.

A Conversation with My Father – Grace Paley

A woman talks with her father whose having heart troubles.  He asks her to write a simple story.  She does, but he is not satisfied.  They argue and she adjusts the story, before they argue again, continuously adjusting the story.  The father sees tragedy in all stories, while thinking his daughter only sees the humor.

The Man Who Was Almost A Man – Richard Wright

I actually didn’t read this.  Got tired of it the first five paragraphs and went and read a summery.

http://litsum.com/man-who-was-almost-a-man/

The Rocking Horse Winner- D.H. Lawrence.

I read this in high school and didn’t like it. Still don’t really enjoy it that much. Basically there is a woman who marries a man who is unfortunate in business and doesn’t love her.  She has trouble loving anyone.  But that really has nothing to do with the rest of the story.  He just felt like telling us.

She has three children, a son named Paul, a daughter named Joan and another unnamed girl.  They hear the house whispering about money, and how they need more of it.  Paul asks his mother about it, confusing lucre for Luck and she explains that filthy lucre is money and that luck is what brings you money.  That their father is an unlucky man, as must she be for marrying him.

Everyone is kinda disturbed by Paul’s fascination with his toy rocking horse and the strange look he gets when he’s riding it.  And apparently he rides it well after growing too old for it.

So one day the Uncle shows up and learns that his nephew has taken an interest in Horse races.   Paul explains that he and the gardener have been placing bets and winning large sums of money that they keep locked away.  He plans on giving his mother the money in the hopes that the voices will stop.  The Uncle doesn’t believe it at first so he asks the nephew who he should bet on in the race at Lincoln.  The boy replies Daffodil.  The Uncle, who doesn’t believe Daffodil will win as the odds are against her, places a five pound bet for each of them.

Daffodil wins, earning Paul 20 pounds (my keyboard lacks a certain symbol, and if this were now, this 20 pounds would equal about $40)

The Uncle becomes partners with the gardener and the nephew.  He takes 5,000 dollars from Paul’s 15,000 pound winnings and takes it to the bank to be given in allotments to Paul’s mother (anonymously, as request by Paul for that would make them unlucky).

Paul’s mother asks for all the money, and Paul says yes, and the wall who whisper start going crazy.  Paul’s mother starts to be concerned when she sees her son still playing with his rocking horse and still having this strange look in his eyes.  Paul meanwhile is starting to loose, and while the Uncle tells to forget about it, he doesn’t.

One night, the mother comes home after an outing with her husband.  She gets this strange feeling and rushes up to her son’s bedroom to find him rocking the horse again.  He keeps rocking till he shouts out the winner of the next game and falls over.  The mother rushes in, slightly terrified of what has just happened (and Mr. D.H. uses some awkward phrasing here).  The son is ill, and the gardener and Uncle place the bet.  However, after hearing that he won the race, Paul gushes about how lucky he is, then dies that night.

But the Uncle reminds the mother “Well, your son may have died, but he got you 80,000 pounds”

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Ficlet

Ok, this just came out in a stream of consciousness.  Its probably not at all canonically correct (well, its AU, but I’m referring to the characterization) and really is just me writing till I stop.  So read at your own risk. I may post it somewhere later if I feel happy with it.

EDIT:  I’m not so happy with it.  Its here to get constructive criticism.  Still a RAOR type of story.  Its actually not finished, but I couldn’t figure out how to save it from OCC ness if I continued.  It does have complete sentences though, and doesn’t end halfway through a sentence like a drabble I posted earlier (on another journal).

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Possible Canon Story

 

There were a series of fanfics for the X-files that I really enjoyed that were from various characters as the series developed during the first two seasons and how the relationships got to be where they were.  And really that has nothing to do with my possible story except that it is a similar concept.

My idea was to a series of Kate fics, her thoughts as she spends her first year as an NCIS agent.  Starting with Yankee White.  It would take place in and between episodes, but it would pretty much stick to canon as far as things go.  Although I’m sure a tad bit of AU will be involved since I’m a shipper and you are bound to get at least Abby/McGee in this if not Tony/Kate.  It would be light, because it is season 1.  If I get Season 1 done, and it seems to go well, I’ll probably do Season 2, which will have more T/K. 

I’m not going to think about season 3 yet.  If I get through season 2, I’m going AU.  Because I can, and usually do.

But I think the first story will take place during Yankee White, while she’s lying there sick, and a little of it post episode.  Basically her thoughts on Tony, Ducky and Gibbs (Did she meet Abby?  Oh well, looks like another rewatch).

We shall see….

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Characterization

I’m reading JAG fics right now since I recently have been watching the early episodes of the show (since it is what NCIS is spun off of) and it got me wondering about something.

When someone has a nickname, or if two characters were to call each other by their last names, would having a relationship change them calling each other that? 

For example, Would Jack O’Neill start calling Sam ‘Sam’ all the time if they were together, or would he still call her Carter?  Now I’m pretty sure Sam would call Jack, Jack (although a few slip ups to Sir would probably happen).  She’s called him that before (again, when not ‘sir).  Sir would be awkward to call one’s boyfriend.

What brought this up was JAG fic where Harm starts calling Mac Sarah all the time.  Now I can see a few times since it is her name.  But the majority of the time?  I think he would still call her Mac. 

I guess its all in how we view the characters, or view how that type of relationship would work. 

I just couldn’t see someone stop using a nickname because they become lovers.  Now, in Sam’s case I could see a change in address because she calls Jack ‘Sir’ and by his title alot due to them being the same chain of command for most of their relationship.   And I think Kate would probably alternate between calling Tony by his name or DiNozzo.  He’d probably still sneak a Katie in every once and awhile.  But its not a huge change from what they do now.

I guess its mostly just a personal quirk that I don’t see having people change what they call people because they switch from being friends to dating/married.    Sometimes I see them using personal nicknames, like someone calling someone named John, Jay or something of that nature.  I’m not big on the whole pet names though.

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A bit of this and a bit of that

So I’m working on my homework assignment for Intro to Fiction.  We are supposed to read a bunch of short stories and one of the appendixes.  The Appendix is on Elements of Fiction.   It should be an interesting read.  I have to take a quiz on it tomorrow.

And I’ll have to sacrifice my poor computer to Linux.  *cries*  I’m just glad my mom said ok, and that I don’t have to worry about having to put it on my laptop.

Anyway, since NCIS is about the only thing coming through my muse these days, I will talk about that.  I have two choices right now.  I can either continue it the way I’m writing it, wherein everything is cannon except the deaths of Jenny and Kate, and everyone knows Kate is alive or I can rewrite it where half the mission is them finding out that Kate’s been alive all these years, kept in a stasis pod by the Trust. 

I also have another choice in what will happen to the Ziva/Tony/Kate storyline.  Originally at the start of the story Ziva and Tony were to be together, in a starting relationship, not quite concrete but the possibly was there.  But though the story they come apart, partially because of Tony/Kate and partially because I have a future love interest for Ziva (there is a certain Major in Stargate-dom who is need of a love interest, not to mention a promotion.).  The other option was that Tony and Kate would have almost moments, but at the end of this story, Kate goes off with her boyfriend David and Tony goes off to date whatever pretty lady comes his way (Ziva still getting the Major).  And then I’d write a sequel that was a few years down the road where they actually get together.

I’m thinking the first one is probably the best.  Although what do I do about David.  He’s still Kate’s boyfriend, and they will have to break up.  I don’t do cheating.  And the ultimate shipper goal is that Kate and Tony get together at some point.

Although thanks to certain Fanfic writers I now have it in my personal universe that the week between SWAK and TWILIGHT Tony and Kate made headway towards being a couple.  So I have it in my head that the two had a date planned for that weekend, which of course never happened due to Ari. 

The plot continues to grow.  Although should Ari have a part time job as a Trust Agent?  Perhaps I should leave him out of this story.  After all, there was a two parter with the express intent to kill him, so I should let him lie in peace.

Basic Plot as is right now is that the Trust wants to make hosts that are stronger then the usual bunch (People are idiots, just ask the guy who brought back the replicators).  They hire a bunch of scientists, telling them that they want to create a group of super soldiers to fight terrorism and to be the start of a new generation of humans who have more immunities and such.

The Marine/Petty Officer victim of the week (I will one day start taking a count of who dies, because it seems like those two are the most hit on NCIS) will be apart of this group.  He will have on his computer information about the selection process and how they got their materials.  However, he will disagree with a Trust Agent and be killed and they will wipe his Hard Drive.  But because they are stupid (as all good Villains usually end up being), Abby & McGee will work wonders and get the information back. 

They will track down and find the ‘camp’ where all the testing is being done and where the children live once they are born.  There are five children who have survived to toddler hood, 2 five year olds and 3 two year olds. One of the two year olds is Kat, the daughter of Kate & Tony. 

I need to flesh out some of the stops between finding POVOTW and finding the kids.  But that is the basic gist so far.  I need to refamilarize myself with the Trust.

ooooo..>Athena.   Got to remember to use her.  After all, I don’t think she’s quite dead yet.

Basically the story will have a plot besides trying to bring those two together and ignoring canon death of characters.  Though I have been known to do that, ignore canon. (see my Draco/Ginny collection).

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General Nonsense

I forgot to post before midnight, so I have no post for yesterday.  Although yesterday as I am typing this was only 18 minutes ago.  I suppose I can change the time of posting to be before midnight.  Well, if you see the date being the 27th, you’ll know it was really written in the early morning of the 28th.

School has required me to make yet another blog.  So Sokorra.blog.com is now open.  Its for a web marketing class, so I’m sure its going to be very boring to read.   But its there and if you come across it and wonder if its the same person, it is.

I’m going to be writing some short story reviews and homework notes here.  It just seems like a better place to put it and I’ll have it as backup in case my personal copy fails.

I’m going to be low on the actual new writing bit this week, trying to adjust my schedule to fit school and all.  So I will be posting some older fics and perhaps some of my original work here.

I’m thinking of writing a few shorts that deal within the universe I created in my head for a couple of these fandoms of mine. Not the same story, different for each fandom.  But I’m going to try to challenge myself so I’m going to open up for general prompts.  Give me a word, color or even a picture prompt if your so inclined.  I’ll choose the fandom though.  Or perhaps even write something original.

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Test Out: Kate Fic

 

So I have a possible start to the Kate fic.  Its under the premise that Kate has been working with Jack for several years, trying to form a organization that would investigate on earth incidents of alien issues leaving the SGC to do other world exploration.

She convinces Jack that her old NCIS team would be perfect for the job, saying it was also a good way to interact with other agencies.  They would be NCIS most of the time, called out when Jack & HWS need them.

So here it is.   I may change it, I may delete it or it may end up in the final cut.  But I’m putting here for some Constructive criticism so I can improve it and get better myself.

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